Please have the feedback for your 1st draft. Good work everyone. Good start.
The main issues, which need to be addressed:
- sentence structure and [entire] paper structure. is there a “flow” in the narration. transitions?
Please DO consider the Write Place in helping you with this task
- “mundane” (on a first glance), but important details:
vocabulary: please make sure your 2nd draft is rid of: thing, stuff, get, put. Also: of that, who, what. Find the right word
- in-text citation. make sure you consult the APA style
- please do believe me, when I tell you: it is obvious, if you are submitting one-time draft, or a draft, rewritten numerous times trough the month. Please do not hold it against me, if the grade does not match your expectations. I am grading you by a rubric. The rubric takes into an account your ability to go through numerous draft.
Those of you missing to submit their 1st draft, please consider a late submission.
Let me know, if questions/suggestion and looking forward to reading your next and improved draft! 🙂