Informal Writing: Tuesday, November 17

  • ask at least five questions about your multiple-source paper assignment, about argument, or about counterargument.
    • What are the weaknesses in my argument?
    • What are the strengths of my argument?
    • Is the research I’ve done enough to back up my argument?
    • What counter arguments may I encounter?
    • How will I defend my argument against these counterarguments?
  • draft an initial thesis statement for your multiple-source paper
    • Discussed further will be the importance of LGBTQ education in high schools as it positively impacts the mental health of LGBTQ students, reduce anti-LGBTQ bully, and promote tolerance.

Reading Reflection #10: Statistics and Draft Annotation

1. Based on your reading of ARQ chapter 10, “Are Any Statistics Deceptive?”, summarize how the following types of statistics can be deceptive. What are some strategies you can use to determine how reliable each type is?

  • Unknowable and biased statistics
    • A problem with Unknowable and Biased Statistics is that we often don’t know how or where the numbers are coming from. We can determine reliability by finding more information on the statistics.
  • Confusing averages
    • averages are not always reliable as there are different methods to find averages but also that there are many events that do not follow averages.
  • Measurement errors
    • Measurements are generally subject to error. The more thorough the research the less likely for error.
  • Concluding one thing, proving another
    • Statistics may deceive us in what they actually are proving. To determine reliability we often have to question ourselves and the authors intentions.
  • Deceiving by omitting information
    • Statistics may also be deceptive in that they do not give the full results.We may need to further investigate and research where the numbers are coming from.

2. In the following paragraph, identify the inadequacies in the evidence:

Campaigns for national office are getting out of hand. Money is playing a central role in more and more elections. The average winner in a senate race now spends over $8 million on their campaign, while typical presidential candidates spend more than $300 million. It is time for some serious changes, because we cannot simply allow politicians to buy their seats through large expenditures on advertisements.

  • The inadequacies in this evidence may include confusing averages as we don’t know which presidential campaigns the numbers were taken from.

3. In the following paragraph, identify the inadequacies in the evidence:

The home is becoming a more dangerous place to spend time. The number of home-related injuries is on the rise. In 2010, approximately 2300 children aged 14 and under died from accidents in the home. Also, 4.7 million people are bitten by dogs each year. To make matters worse, even television, a relatively safe household appliance, is becoming dangerous. In fact, 42,000 people are injured by televisions and television stands each year. With so many accidents in the home, perhaps people need to start spending more time outdoors.

  • The evidence in this paragraph could be concluding one thing but proving another. We don’t know the reasoning behind the statistics. These things feel unrelated to spending time in home, rather that the examples and statistics given prove that there are outlying factors.

 

Informal Blog Posting: Presentation Day 3 Reaction

In regards to the presentations given Dr. Hanna Belay and Dr. Khadija Ali, I thought the presentations were extremely interesting and thorough. I was interested to hear the way COVID affected many people of color, and how effects of the disease continued even after the person no longer had the virus. It was also interesting to hear how people of color were disproportionately affected by the virus.

Informal Blog Post: Presentation Day 2 (Education)

I really enjoyed Professor Heck’s presentation today.  I thought she gave a lot of very good insight on the struggles around equity and diversity in the classroom, as well as the struggles a lot of teachers today are facing. My mom is special education teacher who graduated here at SCSU so hearing everything Professor Heck said, especially about COVID and rising stress levels, rang true. I think in regards to my own research paper it reinstates my point about education being important in overcoming adversity.

10/13 Second Article

Another article I found that may be helpful to our group is “Activists, Allies, and Racists: Helping Teachers Address Racism through Picture Books” by Althier M. Lazar and Robert M. Offenberg. I think the article can be helpful as there needs to be more education about racism starting at younger ages to help prevent racism in the future.

Link(?)

http://dx.doi.org/10.1177/1086296X11413720

 

10/8 Article Blog Posting

Obverservation:

In ““So When It Comes Out, They Aren’t That Surprised That It Is There”: Using Critical Race Theory as a Tool of Analysis of Race and Racism in Education” I believe the main point of the article is racism in the education system and how the Critical Race Theory affects it.

Relevance:

I believe this is relevant to me because I am in the education group.

Argument:

The argument the article is making is that racism is very much active in the education system, it proves this with research and data.

Works Cited:

DeCuir, Jessica T., and Adrienne D. Dixson. “‘So When It Comes Out, They Aren’t That Surprised That It Is There’: Using Critical Race Theory as a Tool of Analysis of Race and Racism in Education.” Educational Researcher, vol. 33, no. 5, June 2004, pp. 26–31, doi:10.3102/0013189X033005026.

Reaction Essay 1 – Trade Journal

The trade journal I have chosen is “Coming Out, Coming Home: Interview of Michael C. LaSala, PhD”. I have chosen this article as coming out is something I relate to and recently went through.

Works Cited:

Martin, Julie M. L. “Coming Out, Coming Home: Interview of Michael C. LaSala, PhD.” The Family Journal, vol. 24, no. 3, July 2016, pp. 304–311, doi:10.1177/1066480716648681.